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Wed Aug 22, 2018 8:41 pm

If anyone would want to help me improve I'd really appreciate it. I have a bit of trouble with.... about everything lmfao, but mainly anatomy and positioning. So I would greatly appreciate it if anyone could redline this to sort of highlight what I need to do to improve. Also, critique is not limited to this specific drawing, please let me have it.

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Thu Aug 23, 2018 12:00 pm

I'd love to help! I won't be back on my laptop for a couple hours though, so when I get back I'll do some redlines and stuff <3
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Thu Aug 23, 2018 12:02 pm

Maotai wrote:
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I'd love to help! I won't be back on my laptop for a couple hours though, so when I get back I'll do some redlines and stuff <3
Thank you so much!! :)
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Sun Aug 26, 2018 6:18 pm

this is what i see, at least! hopefully it's helpful!!
the left eye seemed a little off, the front leg could be moved back a bit, and the back leg was maybe a little stiff???
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Sun Aug 26, 2018 6:21 pm

Thank you so much, that helps me out a bunch!! Those are definitely my weak points lmao.
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Sun Aug 26, 2018 6:22 pm

CrystalBullet wrote:
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Thank you so much, that helps me out a bunch!! Those are definitely my weak points lmao.
im glad i could be of help!!!
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Sun Aug 26, 2018 6:31 pm

Didn't see the new posts oops but also redlined
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From what I noticed it was mainly just a proportioning thing, which I have major issues with but I tried LOL. I wrote in the spots that I changed, otherwise the red is just going over your lines so it wasn't spotty with blue and red. The only thing I forgot to write was that I scaled/moved your snout over slightly for the view. Hopefully it helps some, I can explain anything if you need me to
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Sun Aug 26, 2018 6:34 pm

Ahhhhhh thank you so much, you guys are such a big help! <333
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