first animated wolf run cycle

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Sun Nov 13, 2016 12:41 pm

so i decided to make my first animated wolf run cycle
i just need a few critiques
does this look okay?
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;u; thanks to this for the reference/tutorial help!!!
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Sun Nov 13, 2016 1:32 pm

That's pretty good for a first try, so good job!
I think you need to focus on the articulation of the spine and making everything less stiff. It kinda looks like it has a limp. The neck needs to stretch farther and I think the front legs need more movement.

Instead of just using that tutorial try looking for videos of wolves running.
https://youtu.be/uQpj-a6etmw" onclick="window.open(this.href);return false;
http://bestanimations.com/Animals/Mamma ... ed-gif.gif" onclick="window.open(this.href);return false;
http://vignette3.wikia.nocookie.net/dra ... 0916220119" onclick="window.open(this.href);return false;
https://media.giphy.com/media/1Uai1NjqPtlTi/giphy.gif" onclick="window.open(this.href);return false;
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Sun Nov 13, 2016 1:35 pm

Clovette wrote:That's pretty good for a first try, so good job!
I think you need to focus on the articulation of the spine and making everything less stiff. It kinda looks like it has a limp. The neck needs to stretch farther and I think the front legs need more movement.

Instead of just using that tutorial try looking for videos of wolves running.
https://youtu.be/uQpj-a6etmw" onclick="window.open(this.href);return false;
http://bestanimations.com/Animals/Mamma ... ed-gif.gif" onclick="window.open(this.href);return false;
http://vignette3.wikia.nocookie.net/dra ... 0916220119" onclick="window.open(this.href);return false;
https://media.giphy.com/media/1Uai1NjqPtlTi/giphy.gif" onclick="window.open(this.href);return false;
thanks a lot!! ^^
oh yesss, i'll try to modify the frames so that i fix those a bit (:
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